The bar chart shows the results of a survey, in which people in Europe and the USA were asked what they consider to be the most important factor in the success of a business. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph compares the
factors
regarded as the most significant for a business
to succeed by surveyees in Europe and the USA. Overall
, the character of the director and style of managing the business
were the most important and the political situation was the least for Americans. Europeans also
considered the management of the business
to be the major factor whereas
external factors
to be the minor by Europeans.
Starting with the results of the survey given by Americans, the personality of the director and the style of business
had the largest proportions with 40%. The lower percentage of people answered national security with
just below 20% and only less than 10% of people believed external Change preposition
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factors
were essential. Furthermore
, the political situation had the lowest rate with approximately 5%.
Turning to the response of Europeans, business
management was also
believed to be the most crucial element with nearly 40%, which was a little higher than that of Americans. Regarding the political situation, the personality of the manager and the national economy, theyranged
from under 20% to slightly above 20%. Correct your spelling
they ranged
Lastly
, the external factors
were the least selected with below 10%.Submitted by mizuho on
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