The line graph shows the percentage of different age groups of cinema visitors in a particular country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph depicts the figures for moviegoers in a certain country, grouped
according to
different Linking Words
age
.
Fix the agreement mistake
ages
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
at the beginning of the period, Linking Words
aged
14-24 had the highest preference to go to the cinema, Correct pronoun usage
those aged
while
the oldest group Linking Words
was
the lowest. Except for Verb problem
had
aged
over 50, the three younger groups experienced a diminished trend in 2008.
Looking at the diagram in more detail, in the year 1978, there were 90% of the youth (14-24 Correct pronoun usage
those aged
years
old), 80% Use synonyms
young
adults (25-34 Change preposition
of young
years
old), 60% of Use synonyms
the
middle-aged adults (35-40 Correct article usage
apply
years
old) and 40% of the older adults (over 50 Use synonyms
years
old). A decade later, there was a nearly 20% point decrease in all groups, with 72%, 60%, 40% and 20%, respectively. Interestingly, Use synonyms
affecting
by stars, more and more people had a higher motivation to watch Wrong verb form
affected
movie
in the theater, which bounced back Fix the agreement mistake
movies
the
same level in 1978.
Between 1998 and 2003, the proportion of each age Change preposition
to the
groups
remained Fix the agreement mistake
group
steadily
. Despite higher cinema attendance by youngsters, only those persons who were over 50 rose to around 50% toward the end.Change the word
steady
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
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