the graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line chart displays store the
number
of store openings
and closings
in a single nation between the years 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, the number
of shops that closed and opened both experienced a large fluctuation in specific
period of time. Add an article
a specific
However
, it can be seen that most of the time closings
dominate the openings
, except in 2012 and 2015.
The starting number
of closings
fluctuated roughly between 6.000 and 7.000 during the first four years, before dropping to its lowest point at approximately 600, in 2015. However
, this
number
rocketed to slightly above 5.000 and stayed around this
level until the end of the year, leaving behind the openings
number
with 3.000.
In 2011, around 8.500 shops opened, which is the highest number
for both closings
and openings
, with a variance of approximately 2.000 to closings
. Afterwards, in 2012 it significantly fell to 4.000 before bouncing back up to roughly 6.000, reaching nearly the same level with closings
. This
line then
dropped again to its 2012 level in 2015, where it remained until it fell further
at 3.000 at the end
of the year.Submitted by desyaf99 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, openings, closings with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
▼
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!