the graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

the graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The line chart displays store the
number
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of store
openings
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and
closings
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in a single nation between the years 2011 to 2018.
Overall
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, the
number
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of shops that closed and opened both experienced a large fluctuation in
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period of time.
However
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, it can be seen that most of the time
closings
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dominate the
openings
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, except in 2012 and 2015. The starting
number
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of
closings
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fluctuated roughly between 6.000 and 7.000 during the first four years, before dropping to its lowest point at approximately 600, in 2015.
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,
this
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number
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rocketed to slightly above 5.000 and stayed around
this
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level until the end of the year, leaving behind the
openings
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number
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with 3.000. In 2011, around 8.500 shops opened, which is the highest
number
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for both
closings
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and
openings
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, with a variance of approximately 2.000 to
closings
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. Afterwards, in 2012 it significantly fell to 4.000 before bouncing back up to roughly 6.000, reaching nearly the same level with
closings
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.
This
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line
then
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dropped again to its 2012 level in 2015, where it remained until it fell
further
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at 3.000
at the end
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of the year.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, openings, closings with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • retail landscape
  • net growth
  • market dynamics
  • economic indicators
  • fluctuations
  • pivotal
  • consumption patterns
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • downward/upward trend
  • stabilize
  • recession
  • boom
  • retail sector
  • closure rate
  • inauguration/opening rate
  • consumer market
  • saturate
  • commercial viability
  • profitability
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