The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The two pie charts
illustrates
the percentages of the marital Change the verb form
illustrate
status
of Canada
and Australia. On the whole, we can see that separated but not divorced and married accounts
for huge percentages in all material Fix the agreement mistake
account
status
in both countries.
One of the the
most noticeable Remove the redundancy
apply
point
is that the proportion of separated but not divorced is at around 50% in Change to a plural noun
points
two
nations. More specifically, it is the highest Correct article usage
the two
status
in Australia at 53% and the second highest at 41 % in Canada
.
The second noticeable point is that Married is
Verb problem
marriage
also
have
Correct subject-verb agreement
has
high
rate, which is at 29% in Australia, and 46% in Add an article
a high
Canada
.
Regarding other statuses, there are almost the same percentages in both nations at about 5% in never married and widows. But Interestingly, same sex
marriage is Add a hyphen
same-sex
only
Correct article usage
the only
status
in Canada
. It is only 3% but higher than divorced at 1%, and there is no record in Canada
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