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The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The bar chart demonstrates the average worldwide
sales
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 of the top 5 mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. It is salient to note that
Samsung
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 and
Nokia
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 were most selling companies in a 3-year period
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 ,
Nokia
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 sold the most mobile phones between 2009 and 2011 , but
Samsung
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 became the best-selling brand in 2013 .
Samsung
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 and Apple displayed the biggest growth in
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 over the 5-year period. LG illustrated a slight decrease
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 ZTE maintained stabilization In 2009,
Nokia
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 sold close to 450
million
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 mobile phones , which was almost double that of the second most successful manufacturer . Over a 5-year period,
Nokia
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's
sales
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 fell by 200
million
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 units,
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Samsung
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 rose gradually . By 2011 ,
Samsung
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 had become the market leader with
sales
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 reaching approximately 450
million
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 units Other 3 figures ; Apple , LG,
ZTE
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 sold around 25
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 , 125
million
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 , and 50
million
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 mobile handsets respectively.
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, in the following 3
years
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 Apple displayed a sharp increase of almost 5 times more than the previous one , by overlooking the other 2 companies , reaching about 150
million
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sales
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 in 2013
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