WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The table and pie charts
demontrate
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demonstrate
the origin of the
police
budget
and the ways the
money
was spent respectively during 2 years from 2017 to 2018 in a specific place
of
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the United Kingdom. In 2017, the national government provided the largest amount of
money
showing the number of 175.5m
pounds
while
local taxes were the second main source to contribute to the
police
budget
with the amount of 91.2m
pounds
.
Moreover
,
as for
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the figure for the
budget
coming from other sources including grants was only 38m
pounds
showing the total
police
budget
was 304.7m
pounds
as a result
in 2017. Compared with the year
of
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2018, similar features can be seen in both the origin of the
police
budget
and the distributions of the
money
.
As the
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The
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figures for the
money
coming from the national government, local taxes and other sources are 177.8m
pounds
, 102.3m
pounds
and 38.5m
pounds
respectively indicating 318.6m
pounds
in total. The percentages of the distribution to salaries and the percentage of the distribution to technology decreased from 75% to 69% and increased from 8% to 14% respectively during the 2 years
while
the figure for the
money
distributed to buildings and transport remained unchanged (17%).
Overall
, in these two years, the national government was the most significant source of the
police
budget
and most of the
money
was paid for salaries of officers and staff.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words police, budget, money, m, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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