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The diagram below shows the plan of a library in 2001 and 2009. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram below shows the plan of a library in 2001 and 2009. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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showing
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structure
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the structure
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 plan of
library
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the library
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 in 2001 and 2009 .Based on
digram
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diagram
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 details both
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picture
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have
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the same
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same
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the same
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 dimensions but different elements.
The
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 ground floor of
book
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the book
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 store in 2001,
building
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the building
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 top view
show
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shows
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entrance
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the entrance
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 first step into
building
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the building
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in
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on
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 the left
side
stairs
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of stairs
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 service area,
few
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a few
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 steps forward
then
 will be standing
in-front
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in front
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 of
tables
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the tables
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 in
squares
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 size. The huge table
in
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on
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right
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the right
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side
some
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has some
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 papers on it
such
 as
newspaper
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newspapers
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 magazines etc… The roof on
left
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the left
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side
were
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self help
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 and historical books both in
same
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 line. The
library
 arrangement in 2009 had been changed regarding
to
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apply
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top view images, as shown
once
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in
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 entry
library
,
first
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the first
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 view would be
librarian’s
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the librarian’s
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 desk , in the right
side
 stairs between
them
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the
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 space to
main
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the main
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 hall to the
library
.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
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