The diagram below shows the process of making soft cheese. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process of making soft cheese. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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A glance at the diagram depicts the soft cheese-making process which contains five stages.
Overall
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, making soft cheese consists of various strategies using the factors of high and low temperature.
Moreover
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, the process is time and effort consuming which means it will need
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professional attitudes. First of all, the ingredients of milk and water should be mixed together very well.
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the mixture will be cooled at about 5
C
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for two
hours
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. After cooling, a step of fermentation will begin but not before adding the salt. The previous part should
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two
hours
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at nearly 35
C
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and
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it will start to evaporate. Evaporation will take place after eight
hours
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at the water's boiling point which is 100
C
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. The cheese will
then
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witness
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cooling for approximately eight
hours
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at more or less 5
C
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. The final result will be obtained as a soft cheese
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getting rid of excessive water as a waste.
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