The graph below shows that the persentage of Australian export to four countries from 1990 to 2012

The graph below shows that the persentage of Australian export to four countries  from 1990 to 2012
The line graph illustrates the Australine
export
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exports
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to Japan, America,
China
and
India
from 1990 to 2012.
Overall
,
export
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the export
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rate
of Japan,
US
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the US
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and
india
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India
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showed
a
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steady
while
the percentage of
export
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exports
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in
China
experienced a significant rise over the period. In detail, in 1990 the
export
proportion of
China
and
India
were
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nearly 0% for both countries.
China
's
rate
increased sharply
throught
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through
throughout
the period, exceeding all
countray
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country
almost 30% in 2012. In
meantime
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the meantime
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, the percentage of
export
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exports
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to
India
was
in
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apply
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steady
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a steady
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state
untile
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until
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2000
and
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increase
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increased
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from 2005 to 2006 and
return
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returned
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to
drop
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a drop
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in 2012 which is the lowest. Moving on
the
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rest
exports
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of exports
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, in 1990 the
export
rate
of Japan (30%) was the highest among the fourth
counries
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countries
.
However
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it
decline
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declined
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withine
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within
with
the years until it
reach
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reached
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less than 20% in 2012. The US
rate
in 1990 was 10% and it
is
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fluctuated until it
reach
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reached
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less than 10 %
in
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at
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the end of
period
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the period
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.
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