Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Environment-related issues have always been a hot and controversial topic among societies, especially, in

this

particular era.

Moreover

, some argue that the extinction of some species of creatures is the primary environmental matter,

whereas

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contrast, some don’t. In

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essay, I comply with the latter opinion, and

therefore

, I will be clarifying two sides in the upcoming points. On the one hand, the following reasons might be why the first perspective appears.

Firstly

, when the extinction realistically kicks in, the natural food chain will be affected, negatively. Imagine

this

, if herbivorous animals, like rabbits, are gone forever,

then

what are left for the carnivorous ones?

This

, somehow, might initiate risky situations, like wild animals flocking to residential sites in order to seek

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foods

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, for illustration. As for the plants, they provide human beings with

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atmosphere, and fresh breezes,

therefore

, without them, the world is likely to encounter harsh sequels, namely respiratory diseases, extreme weather,… and so on.

On the other hand

,

in addition

to the first viewpoint, there are more puzzling cases in terms of the environment to consider. One of them ought to be glacial thawing, originated by global warming. As studies have shown, a significant volume of melted ice in Greenland

due to

climate change, and environmental

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is presently at its highest extent throughout the past 10.000 years, which possibly results in rising sea levels.

Consequently

,

this

impacts billions of lives on Earth, including losses of lands, deteriorated agricultural production, and some natural disasters.

Also

, global warming is on the list.

This

phenomenon creates serious heatwaves in various nations, like

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India’s capital city, New Delhi suffers from the worst scorching season ever in the past 20 years. In short, these heart-breaking phenomena cause the gone-away on certain animals and vegetation owing to losing accommodations

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or being unadaptable to spontaneously changed temperatures. In summary, from my observation, I realize that species’ disappearance is solely one of the bad results, caused by other major issues like

ice-melting

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phenomenon,

globe’s

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increasing temperature, and the ubiquitous presence of garbage,…

Therefore

, I believe that if we,

finally

, control the given causes, the rest of the consequences like extinction,

for instance

, will be wiped away.