The given graph shows the nitrogen oxide emissions produced by four vehicles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
line graph illustrates the amount of nitrogen oxide in grams per kilometer which releases
from 4 different types of vehicles over the speed of 10 to 130 kilometers per hour.
It can be seen buses account for the most Wrong verb form
is released
emission
Fix the agreement mistake
emissions
following
by lorries regardless of their speed Wrong verb form
followed
while
diesel and petrol cars are the least producer of nitrogen oxide in all levels of speed.
At the speed of 10(kph
), buses emission 40(g
/km
) which is the highest amount in comparison with others. Though at the speed of 60(kph
), the emission shows a sink to around 20(g
/km
). However
, it grows dramatically and recover
its previous level by more than 40 (Change the verb form
recovers
g
/km
) at the speed of 130(kph
). On the other hand
, this
trend follows
by lorries the second responsible for releasing Wrong verb form
is followed
of
nitrogen oxide. Change preposition
apply
In
the lowest speed, lorries release less than 35(Change preposition
At
g
/km
). But this
trend drops sharply to just above 15(g
/km
) at 90(kph
) and then
rise
Correct subject-verb agreement
rises
up
again to less than 25(Change preposition
apply
g
/km
) at 130(kph
) speed.
On the contrary
, diesel car emits about 7(g
/km
) at the beginning and despite minor fluctuations
it remains almost steady Add a comma
fluctuations,
at the end
with 5(g
/km
). Petrol car
Fix the agreement mistake
cars
also
release 10 (g
/km
) at speed
of 10(Correct article usage
a speed
kph
) and remain constant with a little increase to 11(g
/km
) at the speed of 130(kph
).Submitted by m.tavasoli18 on
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words kph, g, km with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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