The bar charts below show the prevalence of obesity among boys and girls aged 12 to 19 years by ethnicity, in the United States for the years 2004 and 2014.
The graphs below show the percentage of obese men and women aged 12-19 in the UK by nationality over the 10 years from 2004 to 2014.
Overall
,it is obvious that In 2014, the percentage of people with obesity increased in all three ethnicities, with Hispanic boys and non-Hispanic
Black girls
each reaching the highest percentages among their gender.
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White and Non-Hispanic
teenagers were 12 and 11 percent
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,among boys, the highest increase was among ethnic Hispanics, by 14 percent
in the 10 years from 2004 to 2014.
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Non-Hispanic
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