The table below shows the participayion of people over 15 in selected sports and phusical recreation activities by gender in Australia during the period 2011-12.
The multiple bar chart illustrates the percentage of Australian people who regularly did physical activity in 2010, compared by gender in each
age
group. The Use synonyms
age
groups are 15 to 24, 25 to 34, 35 to 44, 45 to 54, 55 to 64, and more than equal to 65.
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Overall
, the graph showed that Australian women were developing more interest in sports than men. The female proportion outweighed the male in all Linking Words
age
categories, except for teenagers (15 to 24) who were slightly dominated by males in the given period.
Among the groups that were dominated by Use synonyms
females
, the Use synonyms
age
bracket of 45 to 54, 55 to 64, and 35 to 44 had the biggest portion, with 53.3%, 53%, and 52%, respectively. Use synonyms
Besides
, the male proportion for those brackets was 43.1%, 45.1%, and 39.5%, consecutively. Linking Words
Similarly
, at the Linking Words
age
of 25 to 34, Use synonyms
females
proportion was 48.9% and males at 42.2%.
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However
, for the Linking Words
age
65 and over, the difference was less than 1%, but still dominated by Use synonyms
females
. Use synonyms
Lastly
, when it comes to the Linking Words
age
of 15 to 24, the male percentage surpassed the female with 52.8%, with Use synonyms
females
only at 47.7%.Use synonyms
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