The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major citites with date opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparison where relevant.

The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major citites with date opened, kilometres of route and passenger numbers per year in millions Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparison where relevant.
The table illustrates some details about the underground transport system in 6 different countries, including opening dates, the lengths and the
number
of yearly
passengers
.
It is clear that
London is the first city
enjoying
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this
means of transportation, which started to be used in the year 1863,
while
Los Angeles is the newest one, opening in 2001. London
also
has the longest route of railways (394
kilometers
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kilometres
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),
whereas
the length of railways in Kyoto is only 11
kilometers
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kilometres
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, making it the shortest railway system between these countries. looking at the
number
of
passengers
, who prefer using
this
transportation method, Tokyo stands in the first place. Following which is Paris and
london
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which are the second and third respectively. Again Kyoto is the country in which only 45 million people use underground railways on a yearly basis, which is why it stands in
the
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sixth place regarding
number
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a number
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of yearly
passengers
.
Although
Tokyo
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Tokyo's
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underground railway system is not the longest one as far as these countries are concerned, it has 1928 million
passangers
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passengers
per year. Kyoto stands in the
last
place regarding both
number
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the number
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of
passengers
and the length of railway routes.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, passengers with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stands" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • underground railway systems
  • date opened
  • kilometres of route
  • passenger numbers per year
  • summarise
  • main features
  • comparison
  • relevant
  • oldest
  • recent additions
  • route length
  • network
  • transport
  • massive
  • annually
  • comparatively shorter
  • follows closely behind
  • lowest number
  • second highest
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