The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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the proportion of

energy

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types

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used by Australian households with the proportion of

gas

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emission

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emissions

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derived from these

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. Looking at an

overall

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perspective, all

energy

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, except for heating

energy

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, result in

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higher

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emissions rates than these

energy

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types

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of usage rates. Heating is the biggest

energy

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type, accounting for nearly half of all usage. 15% of heating

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used leads to

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gas

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emissions

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cooling is the lesser

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type, only 2% of all usage, used by Australian householders, and

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causes

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3%

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gas

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emission

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rates.

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Australian householders heating is the

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energy

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type, nearly more than

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(42%). With regard

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generates

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greenhouse

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gas

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emission

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,

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hits

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of 15%. People use water heating, nearly less than

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(30%).

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grows only 2% to 32%.

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cooling is used

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, 2%, by householders,

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show

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up the greater

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to 3% as

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.

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, the lesser

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of greenhouse

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gas

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emission

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is turned out with cooling. Lighthing and refrigeration

energy

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using

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are, 4% and 7%, respectively. These transformate to

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gas

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emission

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amount

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increase to two times, 8% and 14%, respectively. Other

applliances

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appliances

energy

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are

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used 15% and

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using

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led to

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less than

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( 28%).