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The following map details a town now and a proposed future layout. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The following map details a town now and a proposed future layout. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map below
illustrate
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 the future development plan of the
town
.
Overall
, there have been several developments, the most noticeable being the Industrial estate, The A4
street
 will be added,
the
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 central Roundabout will be
bulid
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built
 in. Currently, the
Air field
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is
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found in the
northweast
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northwest
northeast
north-east
 of the map
have
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 been replaced in the future layout
to
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Industrial
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the Industrial
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 estate connection to the Railway.
Morever
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Moreover
, a new
street
 A4
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 been constructed to connect the
Town
center
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centre
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 with the A2
street
. The new
street
located
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 in
south
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 of the
town
.
Additionally
, A new Roundabout
planned
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 to be
setup
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set up
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 at the
center
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centre
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 of the city it aims to link the
Town
center
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centre
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 with A2
street
 . The
Town
center
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centre
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dosenot
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does not
doesn't
 shows any changes in
the
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size,
However
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 they connect to the developed road A4 on the east side and the big roundabout on the
nourthwest
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northwest
.
Consquentley
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Consequently
, it will shrink the
bulid-up
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build-up
 area ring road.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, street, center with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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