The following map details a town now and a proposed future layout. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map below

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the future development plan of the

town

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, there have been several developments, the most noticeable being the Industrial estate, The A4

street

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will be added,

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central Roundabout will be

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built

in. Currently, the

Air field

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found in the

northweast

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northwest

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of the map

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been replaced in the future layout

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Industrial

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the Industrial

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estate connection to the Railway.

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, a new

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been constructed to connect the

Town

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center

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with the A2

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. The new

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located

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south

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the south

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of the

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, A new Roundabout

planned

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to be

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at the

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center

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of the city it aims to link the

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center

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with A2

street

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. The

Town

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center

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dosenot

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does not

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size,

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However

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they connect to the developed road A4 on the east side and the big roundabout on the

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northwest

Consquentley

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, it will shrink the

bulid-up

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build-up

area ring road.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, street, center with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

152 words

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