The map bellow show the chances that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780,1860 and 2000.

The map bellow show the chances that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780,1860 and 2000.
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The map illustrates how a city called Willington has developed in three different years(1780,1860 and 2000).
Overall
, what stands out from the picture is that there has been a significant development in terms of recreational and educational facilities. In the year 1780,there was the
river
ran from the north of the city to the south and the east side of it was occupied by a farm.There were 100 houses in the southwest of the area and to the bottom of them,woodland was situated. In 1860,a bridge was constructed on the
river
and a road ran from the
river
to the residential area was built.The number of houses was extended,
whereas
some part of the farm was demolished and almost half of the trees were chopped down. After 140 years,along the east of the
river
,a number of shops were erected and on the
river
,a wetland was constructed for birds.Meanwhile,the number of houses reached 500 ,and from the residential zone to the south of the city, a new road was built.
Moreover
,the remaining woodland space was cut to make way for schools and sports fields.
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