The bar chart below shows the percentage of people living alone in five different age groups in the USA between 1850 and 2000.
The
given
Bar Chart depicts the Verb problem
apply
propotion
of individuals living on their own Correct your spelling
proportion
amoung
various Correct your spelling
among
age
groups in Use synonyms
USA
Correct article usage
the USA
during
1850 to 2000. Change preposition
from
Overall
, Linking Words
majority
of all Correct article usage
the majority
age
groups Use synonyms
living
alone in 2000 Wrong verb form
lived
where as
Correct your spelling
whereas
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age
Correct article usage
the age
group
55 to 64 Use synonyms
leading
the living alone percentage all Wrong verb form
led
time
.
In 1850 only Correct article usage
the time
people
above 37 years and above were living alone. Use synonyms
However
but 1900 Linking Words
age
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group
27 to 36 started living alone and living alone Use synonyms
age
continued to lower to Use synonyms
17
to 26 Correct article usage
the 17
age
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group
by 1950. Use synonyms
People
from Use synonyms
55
to 64 Correct article usage
the 55
age
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group
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was
the highest percentage in all four periods followed by Verb problem
had
47
to 54 Correct article usage
the 47
age
Use synonyms
group
. from 1900 to 1950, the Use synonyms
propotion
of Correct your spelling
proportion
people
living alone Use synonyms
in
55 to 64 has doubled and by 2000, it has Change preposition
from
further
doubled from 1950. Linking Words
Use synonyms
Age
Correct article usage
The age
group
47 to 54 remained Use synonyms
the
same range from 1850 to 1950 but Change preposition
in the
seen
a significant increase in 2000.
27 to 36 Wrong verb form
saw
age
Use synonyms
group
Use synonyms
people
living alone had slightly increased from 1900 to 1950 and show Use synonyms
remarkable
increase in 2000 from 3 to 8.Add an article
a remarkable
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