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The bar chart below shows the percentage of people living alone in five different age groups in the USA between 1850 and 2000.

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Bar Chart depicts the
propotion
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proportion
 of individuals living on their own
amoung
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among
 various
age
 groups in
USA
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the USA
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during
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from
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 1850 to 2000.
Overall
,
majority
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the majority
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 of all
age
 groups
living
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lived
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 alone in 2000
where as
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whereas
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age
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the age
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group
 55 to 64
leading
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led
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 the living alone percentage all
time
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the time
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. In 1850 only
people
 above 37 years and above were living alone.
However
 but 1900
age
group
 27 to 36 started living alone and living alone
age
 continued to lower to
17
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the 17
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 to 26
age
group
 by 1950.
People
 from
55
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the 55
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 to 64
age
group
was
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had
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 the highest percentage in all four periods followed by
47
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the 47
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 to 54
age
group
. from 1900 to 1950, the
propotion
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proportion
 of
people
 living alone
in
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from
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 55 to 64 has doubled and by 2000, it has
further
 doubled from 1950.
Age
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The age
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group
 47 to 54 remained
the
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in the
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 same range from 1850 to 1950 but
seen
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saw
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 a significant increase in 2000. 27 to 36
age
group
people
 living alone had slightly increased from 1900 to 1950 and show
remarkable
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a remarkable
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 increase in 2000 from 3 to 8.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, group, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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