The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The bar chart illustrates the amount of various drinks in some cities in Australia.
Overall
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, the majority of citizens intentionally visit cafes to purchase coffee or tea. An acquisition of instant caffeine comes in second place in the number of common answers,
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an acquisition of fresh one ranks
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According to
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the statistics, most residents buy drinks in cafes,
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trend is observed in Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart, at 61%, 64% and 62,5% respectively. As for the remaining cities, in Brisbane and Adelaide,
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a negligible difference between individuals who prefer going to cafes and take
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coffee. The former has a distinction of 2,5% and the latter of 1%. As for fresh caffeine, it has been purchased the least in the
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four weeks, especially in Brisbane and Adelaide, with 34% in each city equally. At the same time, Sydney and Melbourne, it is seen the highest number of fresh coffee purchases at 44% and 42,5% respectively.
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in Hobart, there is an average number of procurements of fresh caffeine- 37,5%
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