You have recently travelled on a train and unfortunately left your luggage. Write a letter to the manager of the Lost and Found department of the railway regarding the luggage you accidentally left on the train. In your letter, •give details of your train trip •describe the luggage you left on the train •say what actions you want him/her to take
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing
this
letter via email to express my concern about the backpack I left on the train during my journey from Toronto to Vancouver.
Unfortunately, I was in a hurry because it seemed too late. The meeting I was supposed to attend would start at 6 o'clock. I only had two hours to get to the office. After arriving at the station with a one-hour delay. Considering the pick of the congestion traffic, I guess it took two and a half hours to get there, and consequently
, I was extremely confused. I had two pieces of luggage, and I accidentally left one of them in my cabin. My arriving time was at 4 pm on December 18th, and I was settled on seat number 48 at the cabin No.8
My brown baggage, including four wheels, was on the right-hand upper deck of the cabin. It had a leather cover, a black metal handle, and a golden zip lock.
Since all the very important company documents were in that bag, I should bring to your attention the importance of this
matter and seriously ask you to take action to search for and find them.
Yours faithfully,
Adam RepSubmitted by MASOUDREIHANI1964 on
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Task Achievement
The letter covers all parts of the task: details of the train trip, description of the luggage, and requested actions.
Coherence and Cohesion
The structure of the letter is logical and easy to follow, with a clear beginning, middle, and end.
Task Achievement
The tone of the letter is appropriate for a formal letter to the Lost and Found department.