The graph below shows the percentage of urban/suburban and rural households in a European country that had acces between 1999 and 2004.

The bar chart illustrates the ratio of

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the population

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who have

internet

access, comparing the urban and rural

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households

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in a particular European country from 1999 to 2004. In broad view, the proportion of people who

able

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are able

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to explore the

internet

shows an upward trend between 1999 and 2004, both in urban and rural areas.

Additionally

, it is evident that the number of

internet

users in urban regions exceeded the one who lived in rural regions throughout the given periods.

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with, the percentage of urban

household

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households

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with

internet

access

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15% in 1999. A massive jump was witnessed from 1999 to 2000 with around

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% increase, before

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sustainably to about 55%

at the end

of given periods. In 1999, the

internet

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number of internet

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users in rural areas was relatively low, around only 3%. The percentage grew steadily to around 15% in 2002, before experiencing

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significant growth from 2002 to 2004 with

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% year-on-year increase

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35% in 2004.