The bar chart below shows the international student enrolments at three universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.
The bar chart indicates enrolments for International recruitment in three universities from 2010 until 2012 in both
British
home
students
and International admission.
Generally, sum of women in both categories between 2010 and 2012 showed an increase. On the other hand
, for men, it gives more fluctuations for the British
home
students
. However
, an increase in the number of International students
.
Men with British
home
students
were at their highest in 2012 at 44 and the lowest was in 2011 at about 23. Additionally
, International students
were in the climax for 36 in 2012 and dipped in 2010 by about 20.
For other circumstances, women indicate more inclination for women British
home
students
has its highest in 2012 at 45 and its lowest was in 2010 at about 32. International students
were at their highest in 2012 at 20 and the lowest was in 2010 at about 14.Submitted by Raffi Feizal
on
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