The bar chart below shows the international student enrolments at three universities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparison where relevant.
The bar chart indicates enrolments for International recruitment in three universities from 2010 until 2012 in both
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students
and International admission.
Generally, sum of women in both categories between 2010 and 2012 showed an increase. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, for men, it gives more fluctuations for the Linking Words
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However
, an increase in the number of International Linking Words
students
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students
were at their highest in 2012 at 44 and the lowest was in 2011 at about 23. Use synonyms
Additionally
, International Linking Words
students
were in the climax for 36 in 2012 and dipped in 2010 by about 20.
For other circumstances, women indicate more inclination for women Use synonyms
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has its highest in 2012 at 45 and its lowest was in 2010 at about 32. International Use synonyms
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were at their highest in 2012 at 20 and the lowest was in 2010 at about 14.Use synonyms
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