Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings. Others create housing by building houses on a wider area of land. What solution is better?
I believe that both options have
its
own reasoning. Building housing Correct pronoun usage
their
areas
on taller buildings
serves purpose
Add an article
the purpose
a purpose
to minimize
the land it would take to build normal, standard Change preposition
of minimizing
houses
. However
, some people
might prefer building houses
on wider
area of land, as it gives them freedom and extra space like a small yard or lawn. Let's take a deeper look into each Add an article
a wider
the wider
perspectives
.
Taller Change to a singular noun
perspective
buildings
offer a better view, for some people
who enjoys
seeing Change the verb form
enjoy
sceneries
from above. Fix the agreement mistake
scenery
Furthermore
, housing areas
like apartments, offer free facilitations that come with the unit (e.g., swimming pool, gym, etc.). Whereas
, a regular house doesn't have that benefit. However
, housing areas
on tall buildings
do have its
drawbacks, one of them being the restrictions/regulations. Correct pronoun usage
their
For instance
, when living in an apartment/condo, there are certain rules that may be applied such
as,
no loud noises after 7 p.m., no pets inside, no smoking inside the unit, etc. Remove the comma
apply
This
may be a huge deal breaker for some people
.
On the contrary
, regular houses
does
not have Change the verb form
do
such
restrictions. You generally have the freedom to do anything within your unit, as long as it doesn't bother nor danger the lives of people
in the neighbourhood. Additionally
, the average western
Capitalize word
Western
houses
usually comes with a small lawn or yard, which you can use for anything to Fix the agreement mistake
house
you
heart's content. Correct pronoun usage
your
However
, since most regular houses
take significantly more land compared to an apartment/condo, it
can't store more Correct pronoun usage
they
people
in the area compared to an apartment/condo. Thus
, making it less ideal for a city to only have regular housing areas
. Consequently
, the regular housing price might be a lot steeper and not everyone can afford it.
In conclusion, limiting to only one of either options
is less ideal, as Change to a singular noun
option
everybody
needs and preferences vary. A city should have both housing Change noun form
everybody's
areas
in taller buildings
and wider areas
and it must be adjusted according to
the city's population and the residents' needs.Submitted by rizkyy.utama22 on
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coherence cohesion
Your introduction and conclusion were clear and effectively framed the discussion.
task achievement
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