The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050.
The graph demonstrates
population
growth
in two populous country
in the world: Change to a plural noun
countries
China
and India
. The information provides prediction
of Add an article
a prediction
the prediction
population
growth
up to 5 decades from 2000 to 2050. Overall
, India
has stable
Correct article usage
a stable
rise
trend from the beginning of the period
until the end of period
. Add an article
the period
Otherwise
, China
has a slightly
fluctuation in the middle of the Change the adverb
slight
period
,
and a little Remove the comma
apply
growth
at
the Change preposition
in
last
period
.
To begin
, India
had one thousand billion
population
at the beginning of Correct article usage
the 21st
21st
century. It has been Correct article usage
the 21st
arised
in the next Correct your spelling
arisen
decade
for almost one thousand two hundred billion
population
. The
next Change preposition
In the
decade
, it will be
Change the verb form
rise
rise
in the amount of 100 billion
inhabitants. Therefore
, the population
will be more one
thousand three hundred. The next three remaining decades will be Change preposition
than one
growth
consistently around 100 billion
rise
per Change to a plural noun
rises
decade
. At the end
of the period
, India
's population
will reach 1600 billion
, it will be 600 surplus population
from the beginning of the period
.
Next
country, Correct article usage
The next
China
started the population
data in total
of 1250. It has Add an article
a total
Correct article usage
a slightly
slightly
Change the word
slight
rise
number
until 2020. Between 2020 and 2030, Change preposition
in number
China
's population
will remain stable. In contrast
, for the next decade
, it will have a little decline until the end of the period
that
the Correct word choice
when
population
will be 1400. During the period
, China
's population
growth
will slightly rise
from 1250 to 1400.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, growth, china, india, rise, period, billion, decade with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
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