The given table illustrates the data about the independent films released in the UK and the republic of Ireland based on the category of movies in the year 2012.
The table illustrates the
number
of independent films released based on genres. There are a total of 10 genre
listed above. The leading Change to a plural noun
genres
genre
with the most number
of releases are "Drama"
and "Documentary" Correct article usage
the "Drama"
genre
, each taking up 23.6% of the total releases across all categories.
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genres
However
, the leading genre
with the most generated ticket sales income differs from the genres mentioned previously. The genre
that generates the most sales is "Comedy", with the "Horror" genre
coming in as the second. "Comedy" genre
alone contributes 45.4% of the total generated income. Thus
, it is safe to assume that the number
of releases alone doesn't necessarily contribute to the number
of income. There are other variables that may come into play, which information can't be drawn out using this
table's data point only.Submitted by rizkyy.utama22 on
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