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The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050.

The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050.
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The line chart illustrates the number of people living in
India
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 and
China
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 from 2000 and the populace estimation up to 2050. In general,
India
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's
population
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 has grown continuously over the years
whereas
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China
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's
population
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was
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has
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also
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 grown but at a lower rate.
Consequently
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, it is projected that Indian
inhabitants
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 will surpass the number of Chinese
inhabitants
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 specifically after 2030. In 2000, there were approximately 1000
billion
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 of
India
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's populace,
this
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 number was inclined to rapidly reach around 1300
billion
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 in the next two decades. With that historical data, it is forecasted that in 2030
India
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 will have the same
inhabitants
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 with
China
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 at more than 1400
billion
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 and will
finally
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 stretch to almost 1600
billion
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 in 2050. Compared to
India
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,
China
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 had a higher
population
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 in 2000, at more than 1200
billion
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. Despite
China
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's
population
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 being higher and
also
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 increasing, the growth was at a slower rate compared to
India
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. It has only grown by less than 200
billion
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 in the span of 20 years.
Consequently
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, it is estimated that over the years,
China
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's
inhabitants
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 will rather face a downturn and the
population
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 will be below
India
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 at only less than 1400
billion
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, consequently".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words india, china, population, inhabitants, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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