today, students can benefits from widers information through internet. some people think that tradition schooling disappear soon. Do you agree or disagree?

Currently,

pupils

gain benefits from

internet

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due to

the capability for various references. Several people argue that culture schooling will fade sooner.

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essay disagrees with

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point of view because the current technology will not substitute face-to-face communication like in traditional

school

between

teachers

and

students

also

the interaction between the

students

and their friends. The main goal of attending

school

are

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to be educated both in

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and in attitude. Communication between

teachers

and

students

is the main key to

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this

idea.

Therefore

, a good quality of interaction between educators and

pupils

will determine the success rate in accomplishing the main purpose of

school

. Thriving technology is

definately

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definitely

penetrating the education system and

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some people worry, but

this

advancement will not replace the tradition of schooling from the

teachers

and their

students

.

For instance

, an international

school

in Central Java, Indonesia occupied various types of

internet

resources to support the activities, but the strong bond between the

students

and their lecturers is still the main important point

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the

school

conducts its events. Another point is the interaction between

students

. Despite the significant influence of

internet

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in nowadays education, almost all

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students

really enjoy spending their time

for

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discussion

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and having fun. The

pupils

believe,

although

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the

internet

give

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them easier access to lots of information, having brain-storming sessions with each other will make them practice how to think critically and practice their communication

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High

School

learner in Semarang said that most of all her friends like the idea

to have

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homework in

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, so they can

compiled

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more references and

created

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better

answer

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for their

task

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. In conclusion,

the

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advance

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technology

allow

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us to have greater resources for

school

duty, but no matter how dominating

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the

internet

in

school

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the school

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system, it will not change the

tradition

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schooling on how the bonding between

teachers

and

pupils

also

between

students

and their pals as the most essential aspects to reach the purpose of going to

school

.