The bar chart illustrates how seven European nations spend on relaxing activities as a proportion of total household, while the pie chart demonstrates the tendency of the average yearly expenditure on entertaining activities per household in the U.K.
The bar chart illustrates how seven European nations spend on relaxing
activities
as a proportion of total household
, Fix the agreement mistake
households
while
the pie chart demonstrates the tendency of the average yearly expenditure on entertaining activities
per household in the U.K.
In general, it is evident that British citizens spend plenty of money on recreational activities
. They also
show a preference for outdoor activities
.
Speaking of leisure interests in seven European countries as a proportion, the U.K
leads with 21.3 per Correct your spelling
UK
cent
. Following closely behind are Germany, Austria, and Sweden at 16.8, 17.7, and 18.4 per cent
respectively. The next positions are kept by Portugal and Greece which are almost the same at approximately 13 per cent
. And the lowest place belonging
to Italy, with just 10.9 per Wrong verb form
belongs
cent
.
Turning to average
yearly expenditure on recreational Correct article usage
the average
activities
in the U.K
, outdoor Correct your spelling
UK
activities
exceed the rest, at 1431 pounds
, Culture
and Sport follow closely at 588 Correct word choice
and Culture
pounds
. Electric Goods and Music constitutes
an inconsiderable proportion, at 313 Correct subject-verb agreement
constitute
pounds
, while
expenditure on Holidays and Reading Matter is similar, at 268 pounds
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