The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the composition of
students
in the UK after graduation (graduate and postgraduate) except full-time
Change preposition
for full-time
work
in 2018
Overall
, it is clear that
the majority graduates
and postgraduate Change preposition
of graduates
students
are in further
study
. Otherwise
, Voluntary work
is the lowest compared among others (Part-time work
, Further
study
, and Unemployment).
Regarding the number
of graduate students
, the highest number
of the
Correct article usage
apply
students
after graduation in further
study
accounted for almost 30.000. Following that, part-time work
and unemployment are nearly 18.000 and 16.235, respectively. Voluntary is the smallest number
and it is only 3.500.
The majority of postgraduate students
are further
studied in terms of the number
who did not work
after graduation. Moreover
, there is no significant difference between the highest number
and the second,
which is almost 2.600 compared to 2.725. Furthermore
, further
study
has almost 8 times compared to voluntary work
, only 345 and approximately 2 times from unemploymentSubmitted by rezaf.permadi on
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