You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart demonstrates the
amount
of households by Change the quantifier
number
people
's yearly salary in America in three different years.
The number of earning less than $25,000 in a year shows a slight growth from nearly 25 millions
to around 28 Change to singular
million
millions
residents living in America between 2007 and 2011, Change to singular
million
while
it decrease
slightly to less than 28 Wrong verb form
decreased
millions
Change to singular
million
people
in 2015. Moreover
, a similar trend can be seen in the number of households between $25,000 and $49,999 as the figure for this
grew from 27 millions
or so to nearly 30 Change to singular
million
millions
and Change to singular
million
finally
descended to 28 millions
.
Change to singular
million
By contrast
, the amount of annual income ranging from $50,000 to $99,999 remained approximately unchanged from 2007 to 2015. However
, there are nearly 30 millions
Fix the agreement mistake
million
of
dwellers Change preposition
apply
could
gain more than $100,000 in 2007. Correct pronoun usage
who could
This
figure reduced to 27 millions
in 2011 and Change to singular
million
then
markedly rose to more than 33 millions
4 years later.
Change to singular
million
Overall
, during these three years, the feature of people
who are able to earn a specific yearly income remained unchanged despite there are
more Wrong verb form
being
people
who can gain $100,000 or more in 2015.Submitted by 1434110674 on
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