The line graph below shows the consumption of three spreads from 1981 to 2007.

The line graph below shows the consumption of three spreads from 1981 to 2007.
The line graph illustrates the consumption of different kinds of spreads from 1981 and 2007.
Overall
, it is seen that
this
amount
of margarine and butter sold experienced a downward trend. At the beginning of the period, the highest
amount
of consumption by customers was butter, recording above 140
grams
. In five years, it increased slightly before having a sharp decline to 100
grams
.
On the other hand
, the figure for margarine remained steady for five years after having a brief decrease in 1986. At that time, there was no low fat & reduced spreads. When the
amount
of butter fell
to
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below approximately 70
grams
, the low-fat spreads started selling, which was only about 10
grams
.
However
, it went up rapidly to 80
grams
in 2001.
Although
it showed a slight drop again, it was recorded as the highest
amount
among the three spreads
at the end
of the period.
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