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The maps below show changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whee relevant.

The maps below show changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whee relevant.
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The maps highlight data about transformations which have taken place in the
city
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 of Spanish (Castellon), over a 24-year period from 2000 to 2024.
Overall
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, it is clearly seen that the town of Castellon has been modernized a great deal and there has been a lot of renovation, including a new cinema, shopping malls, bars and clubs. One striking change is that a train station has been replaced its place with a police station. In 2000, there were not any bike rental schemes, but as time passed it has been introduced in the
city
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cente
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centre
. As for
a
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the
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 train station which used to be in the west of the town, it has been changed its location above the
city
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 centre. Another main change is the hall of residence for students and the airport which is under construction. A new covered market and a road which connects the university with the
city
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 centre has been built. If we look at the port area of the
city
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, it has been pedestrianized since 2000, and a range of entertaining facilities
such
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 as cinema and clubs have been constructed on the coast of the port. Trees have been cut down in order to erect a new shopping centre.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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