The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
The pie chart compares the shares of the main causes of global
land
degradation
, whereas
the table illustrates the percentage of how three different regions were affected by degraded land
during the 1990s.
Overall
, what stands out from the diagram is that over-grazing is the biggest reason why soil is degraded. Besides
, Europe was the region most affected by worldwide land
degradation
.
Regarding the first one, over-grazing is responsible for the highest proportion of land
degradation
with 35%. There is little difference between the shares of deforestation and over-cultivation, as the former accounts for 30%, while
the latter is lower by a margin of 2%.
The remaining 7% is responsible for a variety of other factors.
According to
the second one, Europe had the highest proportion of land
degradation
with 23%, which was mainly caused by deforestation at approximately 10%. This
is followed by the share of degraded soil in Oceania, with 13%. Additionally
, there was no observed over-grazing in this
area. In comparison, 5% of the land
was degraded in North America, and over-cultivation stood as the main cause with 3.3%.Submitted by writingbhos on
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