the diagram below shows how to recycle glass bottles

the diagram below shows how to recycle glass bottles
IELTS Writing Task Chart for the diagram below shows how to recycle glass bottles
The
given
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chart below illustrates the different stages of
glass
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bottle cycling .
Overall
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, there are a lot of important steps: collecting, processing, and releasing into the market. The whole procedure starts
from
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the bottle gathering. At
first,
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all the used
glass
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bottles
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are collected at the collection point by customers, and
then
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they are delivered to the processing plant
in
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which
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where
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all the
bottles
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are going to be cleaned with
high-pressure
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the high-pressure
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motor. After cleaning, they are classified
according to
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the different colours and sent to the
glass
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factory. In the
glass
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factory,
glass
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bottles
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are smashed into
glass
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pieces and
then
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transferred to the heating furnace in which the
glass
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bottles
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are melted into a liquid. Mixed with new liquid
glass
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, the compound of recycled and new liquid
glass
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is moulded into solid
glass
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bottles
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, which ,afterwards, are going to be launched to various markets for selling ,
thus
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the
glass
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will go to the customers for different purposes.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words glass, bottles with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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