The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The provided image depicts the
process
of
glass
being recycled.
Overall
, there are 6 steps, in a continuous cycle. The
process
begins with a recycling bin, and
then
this
material is sent to treatment plants, where machines wash and sterilise the glasses. In the next stage, the
glass
is crushed and melted, and
after
this
material is moulded in a specific machine to be
finally
used in the new products in supermarkets. The cycle restarts indefinitely. All steps are important to the success of the
process
, but the first phase is the most important. If people do not separate properly the glasses, all the next steps are unless. Special trucks are needed to transport disposable glasses to treatment plants. Inside these industries, some other resources
such
as water, chemical products, and heating are necessary to complete the
process
. The
last
step inside the plant is the transformation of melting
glass
into new products like bottles. In the end, another type of truck is necessary to return the
glass
to consumers.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, glass with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • recycled
  • stages
  • collection
  • waste glass
  • sources
  • bottles
  • jars
  • windows
  • transported
  • recycling facility
  • sorted
  • color
  • processes
  • cleaned
  • impurities
  • labels
  • caps
  • crushed
  • cullet
  • raw material
  • melted
  • furnace
  • temperature
  • molded
  • new glass products
  • distribution
  • consumers
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