The chart below gives information about the household percentage of spending on essential goods in China for the years 1995 and 2011

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The given pie charts illustrate the percentage of expenditure on four different categories in China in two periods years 1995 and 2001.

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, it can clearly be seen that the two biggest spending were food and clothing which contributed more than three-fourths in both times. Medicine and Household goods became the lowest money to be spent. In terms of two majority expenditures, Food and Clothing stood at 68% and 19% in 1995, respectively.

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the number for food experienced a deep fall by 9% in 2011, it was still the biggest category of the bill.

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, the spending on clothing decreased slightly to 18% after 16 years. Regarding the other category with a lower percentage, household goods accounted for 9% in the first period before it experienced a slight growth to 12% in 2011. The smallest spending was on clothing constituted 4% in 1995 but the number witnessed a steep increase in 2011 to just 1% over one-ten.

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The chart below gives information about the household percentage of spending on essential goods in China for the years 1995 and 2011

More and more people are using computers and electric devices to access information; therefore, there is no need for printed books, magazines, and newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You were recently helped by an employee at the airport, write to the airport manager. In your letter:- - describe the problem - Talk about how you were helped - Suggest how to reward the employee

In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that companies should be allowed to collect data about customers freely, while others believe this practice should be restricted. Discuss both sides of this issue.