The graphs indicate the source of complaints about the bank of America and the amount of time it takes to have the complaints resolved.
The pie chart illustrates data on the percentage of complaint sources about the Bank of America,
while
the bar graph shows the time
required to resolve these complaints
.
Overall
, it is obvious that the majority of dissatisfactories
came from Correct your spelling
dissatisfactory
dissatisfactory's
public
, Add an article
the public
while
the longest time
was spent to solve
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solving
complaints
in 2001.
Looking into detail, the largest percentage of total complaints
, 63 per cent
, come
from the public, Wrong verb form
came
while
government agencies accounted for 11 per cent
. Furhermore
,when the rate for out-of-state was 10%, the figure for insurance companies was 2 per Correct your spelling
Furthermore
cent
lower than out of state
.What is more,Add a hyphen
out-of-state
complaints
originated from media and bank employees made up the same percent
.(3 per Change the spelling
per cent
cent
).
With regard to the bar chart,the highest amount of time
was spent for
the solutions of Change preposition
on
complaints
in 2001(about 6 months),but in 2000, this
time
was a month lower than 2001
.Change preposition
in 2001
Correct your spelling
Moreover
Morever
, in 2002, the bank used 4 months,but Correct your spelling
Moreover
this
figure increased and reached 5 months in 2003 and did not fluctuated
during Wrong verb form
fluctuate
a
year from 2003 to 2004Correct article usage
the
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