The pie charts below show percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

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The pie charts provide an overview of
water
usage
in six different
regions
: North
America
, South
America
, Europe, Africa, Central
Asia
, and Southeast
Asia
. In general, the majority of
water
in four
regions
is used for agricultural purposes,
while
the remaining two
regions
primarily utilize
water
for industrial processes. Central
Asia
has the highest proportion of
water
usage
for cultivation at 88%, followed by Africa at 84%, Southeast
Asia
at 81%, and South
America
at 71%. Domestic use accounts for 7-19% of
water
consumption in these
regions
. The remaining percentage, around 10%, is allocated to industrial purposes.
However
, Southeast
Asia
has a higher industrial
usage
at 12% and a slightly lower domestic
usage
at 7%.
In contrast
, Europe and North
America
allocate approximately half of their
water
for industrial purposes, with around 53% and 48% respectively. Agriculture accounts for about 35% of
water
usage
in these
regions
,
while
domestic use represents the smallest proportion, at roughly 15% for both continents.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, usage, regions, america, asia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
  • industrial
  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
  • sustainable management
  • water-scarce
  • population density
  • urbanization
  • data trends
  • resource allocation
  • percentage distribution
  • extremes
  • variations
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