The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given graph illustrates the average
of
temperatures per month and the table gives information regarding how much time to rise the sun in Change preposition
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London
, New York
and Sydney. Overall
, New York
records the highest degree and the lowest temperatures and London
shows similar figures to New York
. Sydeny depicts the opposite ratio compared to the others.
Turning to the details, New York
started at approximately 4 in January
and steadily increased until reaching the top of the list in July, exactly to nearly 30. After that, the temperature decreased to around 5 in December and the figures similar
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were similar
January
. Change preposition
in January
London
's degree was higher than New York
's in January
, exactly approximately 9. However
, in July, the highest degree was lower than in New York
one in July, recording nearly 23. Sydney shows rank the top to around 26 in January
and steadily decreased until July.
Moving to the table, the average of sunshine per year is 2,535 in New York
. Sydney followed behind New York
, recording 2,473. London
shows the lowest recording of 1,180.Submitted by dlwltn6615 on
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