Robots and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace humans in the workplace Why is this happening Do you think this will have a positive or negative impact to society?

Nowadays,

people

and artificial

intelligence

are closely linked and

depending

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on each other

dramtical

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dramatical

dramatically

to develop and improve

society

, to satisfy the demand and advantage for

future

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the future

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.

The

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Society

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society

is more up-to-date

then

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robots

and AI

are

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more important and

this

is

the

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possitive

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positive

way to improve. First of all, AI and other

intelligence

robots

are

developing

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by

human's

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intention and it contains

knowldge

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knowledge

, experience,

intelligence

and

fexibility

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flexibility

that

human

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include in a robot.

As a result

,

people

nowadays are more

attraction

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attracted to

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robots

and AI. Spending less time on finding something or searching

knowledge

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for knowledge

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, taking care of animals, cleaning

house

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or planting trees,... or the factory or company use suitable

robots

for manufacturing and

also

increase productivity.

Furthermore

, artificial

intelligence

and modern

robots

are very useful and helpful for human and their

society

in

manufacture

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and in commercial.

Moreover

, they are the foundation of the improvement of

society

in future and the most important factor

to bring

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in bringing

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up the quality of life, improvement in AI,... problems that

people

are

concern

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about. It is actually solving and tackling problems of environment, manufacture, quality of life,...

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instance

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people

using

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robots

and artificial

intelligence

to produce new

chip

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chips

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for modern

phone

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, they are the most vital energy. In conclusion, AI and

robots

are

in

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of

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the highest value nowadays. They are very necessary

in

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for

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improve

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improving

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quality of life and

tackle

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problems easily. They gain knowledge and experience from

human

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humans

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and

contained

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contain

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these

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value knowledge to serve

people

again. So

that

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apply

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,

robots

and artificial

intelligence

are not actually harmful to

human

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humans

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nowadays and in the future