Around the world, rural people are moving to cities and urban areas, so populations in the countryside are decreasing. Is this a positive or negative development?

In recent years increasing number of

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rural residents have decided to leave their living places and farms to join the people in big

cities

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decision has brought a

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concern regarding a prompt decline in the population of the rural

areas

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. From my personal point of view,

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issue has more negative impacts than positive results, both for the

villages

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and the

cities

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. I would like to start off my discussion by writing about why the country people decide to migrate to the

cities

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. First of all, there

are

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less variety of jobs in

villages

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and

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the work-forces

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work-forces

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workforce

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need

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to be really hard working and strong to be able to deal with agriculture and other related jobs.

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, for that amount of

work-load

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the workers get

paied

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paid

less compared with the similar working hours in the

cities

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.

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, more and more rural people get settled in the

cities

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everyday

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.

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, another significant factor is the better living facilities in most aspects of life in

cities

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as a better transportation system and

definietly

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definitely

a more advanced educational system.

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,

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issue

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some detrimental impacts on

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both

cities

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and urban

areas

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. One of the most important disadvantages is that in the long-term there will be less work-forces in the rural

areas

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so the economy of the

villages

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and the farming industry will be damaged.

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, the production of

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fresh fruits, vegetables and other farming products will be reduced and

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result

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the prices of those will

raise

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rise

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dramatically.

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, the population in the

cities

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will increase significantly and

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over population

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overpopulation

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will in turn put more pressure on the resources

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the evergrowing demands.

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, governments must take some measures to prevent

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. To summarize, nowadays, an increasing number of rural residents migrate to the

cities

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due to

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the lack of facilities in the

villages

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and the better opportunities in the

cities

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. But,

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is damaging for

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both

cities

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and urban

areas

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. So, to avoid

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, governments ought to seek some solutions.