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Children who start reading earlier in life, perform better later on in their school studies. How important are early reading skills in a child's academic performance?

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It is said that the sooner years
children
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 learn to read, the better performances they will make in school
due to
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 enhancing
the
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 reading and understanding speed.
However
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, learning how to be patient and
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able to manage time must
also
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 be considered for their academic years before going to school. It must be understood that
start
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reading early at a young age plays an essential role in
children
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life
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 as it can improve their understanding speed.
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, a child who
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to
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 books or newspapers in
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their early
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 years can easily
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 a faster reading speech compared with their peers because of the experiences which lead to he or she
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 used to summarising the main ideas of what is read.
This
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 is important because
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 those sooner advantages
children
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, they can apply more in understanding
in
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the lessons and get to the point better.
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of
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 Cambridge
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 pointed out that the
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sooner a child in young age interacts with reading
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, the more
proficent
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proficient
 the skill will be in the future which help them in the future. Time management must
also
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 be considered in
children
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's development
besides
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 academic skills.
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, improving reading and understanding skills is easily
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 advantages that
children
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 will have when
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 to
reading
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 before going to school to be better in the classes.
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, the contribution of time management and patience
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takes
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 an essential part
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in helping
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children
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 gain achievements
for preschooling
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in preschool
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Introduction development
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Cohesion improvement
Try to use a wider range of linking words to improve the flow between sentences and paragraphs, which enhances coherence.
Conclusion development
Include a conclusion that summarises your points and restates your main argument. A conclusion helps to give your essay a clear ending.
Detail and example enhancement
For higher scores, introduce specific examples or evidence to support your points. This adds depth to your argument and shows a clear understanding of the topic.
Main point clarity
You effectively emphasized the importance of early reading skills in enhancing a child's understanding speed and academic performance.
Topic exploration
Your essay shows a good attempt at discussing multiple aspects of the topic, such as reading skills and time management.

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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