The graph below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The graph illustrates the proportion of chores using different kinds of
technologies
in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Overall
, it is notable that the rate
of phones went up considerably and most households with various technologies
experienced an upward trend for four years.
At the beginning of the period, the washing machine had the highest rate
among five different technologies
. The figure was 60%. Except for the figure for computers, the other technologies
recorded less than 30%. The figure for washing machines and computers showed a steady increase throughout the period. However
, the percentage of phones rose gradually from 20% to over 70%, which overtook that of the computer at the end
of the period.
With regards to the DVD player, it had decreased by approximately 10% before growing steadily. It rose to 40%. Although
the rate
of Internet climbed slightly from 1996 to 1998, it increased suddenly to over the rate
of DVD players in 1999.Submitted by heoeunsae on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words technologies, rate with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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