The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given line graph highlights information about the earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, over a
ten year
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period
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from 2000 to 2010.
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, it can be clearly seen that the figures for Amandine bakery and Bolo
cakary
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cakery
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show a considerable decline,
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there was a descent in the number of Mari bakeshops over the given
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. Looking at the details , the consumption of Mari Bakeshop accounted for the highest level a little over 80,000 at the beginning of the
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given. After there was a fluctuation during 8 years, the figure declined negligibly and stayed at 40,000 in 2010. In 2000, the share of Amandine Bakery was estimated at just below 60,000 and after staying at
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level for 5 years, it reached the highest point at just above 100,000
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. The usage of Bolo cakery showed the lowest level with 20,000 in 2000 and
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it increased slowly to about 60,000 the
last
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year.
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