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The chart below shows the percentage of young people in higher education in four different countries in 2000, 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of young people in higher education in four different countries in 2000, 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of high school students in four different nations in 2000, 2005 and 2010.
Overall
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, it is seen that countries A and D experienced an upward trend
while
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 the percentage of students in countries B and C had a slight variation for 10
years
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. In 2000, the highest rate of secondary school students was 64%, which was
country
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 D. The higher education rate of countries A, C, and D increased by 14%, 6%, and 14%, respectively.
On the other hand
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, the proportion of higher education in
country
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 B had a slight decline in 5
years
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. In 2010, the education proportion of
country
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 D reached a peak of 80%, which increased by 2% than 5
years
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 ago. With regards to the rate of
country
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, A and B climbed by 10% and 2%, respectively.
However
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country
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 C had the same with 5
years
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 ago, which was 52%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, country with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
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