The map below shows the development of a seaside village between 1995 and present. Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The maps highlight data about changes which have taken place in a seaside village from 1995 to 2024.
Overall
, it is clearly seen that the number of living places, including apartments and housing has increased.
The most noticeable change is that farmland and a forest park, which were two separate destinations have been knocked down and new sports areas Linking Words
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as tennis and golf have been built on the southeast side of the rural area. Linking Words
Moreover
, a car park has been introduced to the public in the east of the hotel. If we look at the west side of the village, a new road has been constructed with houses which are close to the road. Linking Words
In addition
, in 1995, there were fewer houses and as time passed, new houses were constructed.
Looking into detail, a shop which used to be on the north of the road which is near the sea has been replaced with restaurants and a fish market has been substituted for apartments. As regards the sea area, a fishing port has been demolished.Linking Words
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