The graph shows the rates of participation in three different activities in a UK sports club between 1995 and 2015.
The line graph compares the percentages of members of a UK
sports
club engaging in three activities
from 1995 to 2015.
Overall
, what is salient is the waning popularity of swimming, contrasting sharply with gym
activities
, which were increasingly favored
over the Change the spelling
favoured
period
shown. The category of team
sports
witnessed the least change, and it ended up with the highest participation
rate.
At the outset of the period
, swimming boasted the highest participation
rate with half of the club members partaking in. However
, the activity
experienced a steep decline in its popularity, plummeting to a nadir of 15% in 2010, and it remained there for the rest of the period
. This
drastic decrease relegated swimming from the most popular to the least popular activity
.
In contrast
, gym
activities
exhibited a contrasting trend compared to swimming. Despite commencing with the lowest figure of 5%, gym
activities
showed pronounced rises in popularity, surpassing swimming since 2008 to become the second most played activity
. By 2010, their participation
had surged to approximately 28%, representing a roughly sixfold increase since 1995, the most significant increase in the survey. Towards the end of the period
, gym
activities
saw a slight decline in participation
, though this
fall was rather negligible.
Moving finally
to team
sports
, they ascended from second to the most engaged activity
. After remaining steady at around one-third for the first 5 years, the member engagement rates of team
sports
increased noticeably, overtaking swimming from 2003 onwards. The proportions taking part in team
sports
peaked at 40% in 2010, before falling fairly to their initial level at the end
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