Some people think that water is the most important natural resource. Others believe that other resources (such as oil and gold) are more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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every

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of material is so vital for different purposes .Some

individual

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claim that

water

is

very

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crucial natural resource. A few people say that

gold

and

oil

are precious resources. In

this

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I will explain both

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of view

along with

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water

is a

life

.

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, every

kinds

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of

animals

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required

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water

to live.

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, we use

water

for drinking,washing,and planting

as well as

growing crops and bathing.

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scientist

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opinion without

water

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water,

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we can not live on

this

earth and in our body 76 percent

is

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water

in the world one

third

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is

water

.

On the other hand

,

gold

and

oil

are very expensive and demanding materials.

Furthermore

, without

oil

vehical

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vehicle

can not run and industries can not mass production as well

gold

uses

many

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purposes

such

as

to make

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electric

device

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and make

jeoulary

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jewellery

.

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,

last

year

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total production of electricity 70

percent

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contribution

were

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oil

and total

jeoulary

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jocularly

57

percent

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were

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made by

uses

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of

gold

. In my opinion, I would say that both are significant for our daily

life

.But

water

is

more

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vital natural resource for our

life

,

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because we

uses

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water

for different activities from drinking to growing crops.

For

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particular,

According to

science

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our

life

was initiated from

water

and without

water

any animals can not live.So, those are some unavoidable reasons

that is

way

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why

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I consider

water

is so nessarry thing for us. In

conclude

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, every

things

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thing

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is

nessarry

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necessary

in actual context.

water

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Water

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is so expensive in the

dessert

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desert

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area like Saudi Arabia and

gold

is required to make luxurious

jeoulary

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jewellery

and

oil

is needed to run industries,vehicles.