The graph below shows CO2 emissions for different forms of transport in the European Union. The pie chart shows the percentage of European union funds being spent on different forms of transport.
The graph represents the amount of CO2 emitted by the various means of transport in the European Union,
while
the pie chart illustrates the the
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proportion
of money used for the various modes of transport by the European Union.
Overall
, in the bar graph
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graph,
it is clear that
air made the highest CO2 emissions, whilst pie
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the maximum
EU
funds
was utilized by roads.
With regard to bar
graph, personal cars emitted 125 Add an article
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grams
of CO2 per passenger and just half of it were buses with a contribution of 72 grams
of CO2 per passenger. Furthermore
, coaches had a
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of emission
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emissions
grams
of CO2 per passenger whereas
maritime and rail had similar proportions which lies
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grams
of CO2. However
, air is the highest CO2 emitter with a figure of 375 grams
of CO2.
Moving towards the pie chart, the maximum proportion
(52%) of EU
funds
were used for the
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EU
funds
were utilized for the maintenance of railways. Moreover
, the EU
funds
invested in the public transports
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transport
proportion
of a tenth. Lastly
, Intermodal, Inland waterways, Ports and Airports had a negligible proportion
in terms of EU
funds
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Vocabulary: Replace the words co, proportion, eu, funds, grams with synonyms.
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