The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by local authorities in Someland in 1980, 1990 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by local authorities in Someland

 in 1980, 1990 and 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,

 and make comparisons where relevant.
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illustrate information concerning the annual
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spending
by authorities in Someland for the years
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1980, 1990, and 2000. Looking at the
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higher
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education
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and
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had the highest expenditures during the given period, despite a
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and
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. One of the first
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to note is that for the year
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1980, Higher
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is the
higest
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highest
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(35%).
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educations
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takes the second highest
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and it was 25%. The Health and human resources, and the Transportations indicate similar
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accounting for 14%, and 16%, respectively. A cursory glance at the data reveals that the higher
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increased for a decade. The
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slightly dropped even though, the Health and human resources steadily rose. So,
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both
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became the same level at 20%. Another eye-catching trend was that in the year 2000, the environment rate dramatically grew
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consisting
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9%. The Higher
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, the
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,
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Health and human resources slightly decreased from 1990 to 2000.
Furthermore
, the Transportation rapidly climbed by 6% to 22% between 1990 and 2000.
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